Thursday, February 20, 2014

Sneak Peak #5

The final edits are in!  I am going to get started on them now. Things are looking good for The Dungeons of Cetahl to be published by the end of the month. With that in mind, this will be the final sneak peak of the not-yet-edited sequel. Enjoy!



Once again Gentry and Casper found themselves crossing the barren expanse of land north of Bartow, forever in the shadow of the Atlian Mountains. There was no escape from the wind. It attacked them from all sides with a bitter chill that still carried traces of winter even though spring had come long ago.
As the sun began its slow retreat, Gentry found an outcropping of rocks and proceeded to set up camp. He was delighted to see that his fire took hold despite the pervasive wind.
We might actually stay warm tonight.
He had been staring at the flames – lost in thoughts of Daria and Luca – when the sound of hoofbeats echoed in the distance. Many hoofbeats. The unexpected sound filled him with dread.
In all the years Gentry had spent traveling the desolate road north from Bartow, he had never encountered another soul this late in the day. There were still traces of sunlight remaining, so Gentry scrambled up the nearby boulders in hopes of seeing what was coming his way. The boulders were no more than twenty feet high at the most, but they were high enough to give Gentry a better vantage point of the lands south.
His eyes narrowed as he searched the horizon. It did not take long to spot the cloud of dust in the distance. The riders were too far away for Gentry to make out how many were traveling in the party, but he guessed there were at least a half-dozen horsemen based on the size of the dust cloud and the sound of the hoofbeats. He could not fathom why so many riders would be on this particular road this late in the day. He only knew it likely meant trouble.
Fortunately, they were farther away than he would have guessed by the sound of the hoofbeats. Perhaps they have not seen my campfire yet. It was a hopeful thought – but he knew better. He had been burning the fire for over an hour. They most certainly saw something. He knew there was no time to lose. He must tear down the camp and hide – or run – fast!
He slid part of the way down the boulders before deciding to jump in order to save some time. He immediately regretted that decision. In his haste, Gentry failed to notice the pile of loose rocks that littered the ground at the base of the boulders. His ankle rolled awkwardly in the landing and he cried out in pain.
Cursing himself, Gentry hobbled along towards the fire. He grabbed one of the blankets that he had used to keep Casper warm at night and began swatting furiously at the flames. The horse let out a nervous neigh as Gentry desperately tried to put out the fire.
“Quiet, Casper!” Gentry barked.
For once, Casper listened.
With the fire finally out, Gentry focused his efforts on the rest of the campsite. The tent came down quicker than expected, and he began dragging the tarp and his remaining baggage behind the outcropping of rocks. He led Casper behind the boulders and sank down low – gingerly extending the leg with the throbbing ankle out before him as he slid to the ground.
Ironically, Gentry now found himself grateful for the wind. Its erratic gusts would make pinpointing the source of the fire that much harder. He just hoped the faint remnants of his campsite were far enough away from the road to escape the attention of the riders.
 Please do not let them see it, he begged to the heavens. It is too late to run.
Gentry closed his eyes. At first, it was hard to discern the sound of the approaching hoofbeats over his own beating heart – but the stampede of rhythmic clopping eventually grew louder and louder, overtaking all other sounds. He held his breath and waited. It would not be long now.

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